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Desde el baño del trabajo
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Part 2: Desde el baño del trabajo

Diego retreats to his office bathroom in Valencia to process what he heard, while Valentina rewrites messages she can't bring herself to send. Their mutual friends in the group chat read the thread in stunned silence — and then Diego asks the one question that hurts most.

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1Lo que no borré a tiempo2Desde el baño del trabajo3El billete en el cajón4Antes de irme5La versión real
Private chat: Diego and Valentina 💬

Valencia. The same afternoon. Diego has been in the bathroom on the second floor of his office for nine minutes — the one nobody uses because the tap drips. Someone has knocked on the door twice. He hasn't answered.

Diego
Diego

i need five minutes

Valentina sees the message. She reads it three times. She starts to write.

The typing dots appear on Valentina's side. And they disappear. And they return. And they disappear. This goes on for twenty minutes.

Group: The Gang 🍻

Meanwhile, in the group of friends — the same one where Valentina sent the audio by mistake — Marcos has heard it. Lucía too.

Marcos
Marcos

hey

Lucía
Lucía

yes

Marcos
Marcos

was that audio for this group?

Lucía
Lucía

no, marcos. clearly not

Marcos
Marcos

damn

Lucía
Lucía

should we write something?

Marcos
Marcos

i don't know. i don't think so. this isn't ours

Lucía
Lucía

no. you're right

Marcos
Marcos

poor both of them

The group falls silent. Neither Marcos nor Lucía write anything else. Valentina's audio is still up there, with blue checkmarks from both of them.

Private chat: Diego and Valentina 💬

In Barcelona, Valentina is still in the same chair. She has ordered another coffee from the waiter because she didn't know how to explain that she had been there for an hour without moving. In Valencia, someone knocks on the bathroom door again.

Diego
DiegoA photo taken in a small modern office bathroom — white tiles, fluorescent light, a narrow frosted window. On the mirror someone has written with a dry-erase marker the word REUNIÓN with an arrow pointing down and a time. The photo is slightly blurred and off-centre, like it was taken without thinking. Charming ink and watercolor painting style, clean lines, vibrant but soft color palette.
Diego
Diego

they're knocking on the door for the five o'clock meeting. i've been in here for i don't know how long

Valentina
Valentina

Valentina
Valentina

i'm sorry

Diego
Diego

are you sorry for sending the audio or are you sorry for what you said in it?

Valentina starts writing. Deletes. Writes again. Deletes again. The dots appear and disappear four times in a row.

Valentina
Valentina

for both things

Diego reads the message. He doesn't write anything for three minutes. Valentina stares at the screen without blinking.

Private chat: Valentina and Elena 💬
Elena
Elena

valen, are you okay?

Valentina
Valentina

Elena
Elena

has he responded?

Valentina
Valentina

yes. he's... calm. too calm. that's what scares me the most

Elena
Elena
Voice message

Valentina
Valentina

thanks ele

Private chat: Diego and Valentina 💬

Valentina's phone vibrates. It's a notification from the chat with Diego. She switches conversations.

Diego
Diego

i'm trying to understand it. i really am

Diego
Diego

but there's one thing i don't understand

Diego
Diego

we talk every day. every day, valen. and you never said anything

Valentina
Valentina

i know

Valentina
Valentina

i didn't know how. or i didn't want to know how. i don't even know which of the two

Diego
Diego

okay

Diego leaves the bathroom. He walks past the meeting room with his head down. A colleague asks if he's okay. He nods and keeps walking. He goes out the stairs to the outside of the building. The street in Valencia smells of fried food and exhaust. He leans against the wall and keeps writing.

Diego
DiegoA photo taken from street level leaning against a pale concrete wall — looking up at a narrow Valencia street between two buildings, late afternoon sun cutting a sharp orange line across the upper floors, a scooter parked nearby slightly out of focus. Charming ink and watercolor painting style, clean lines, vibrant but soft color palette.
Diego
Diego

i went outside. i couldn't stay in there anymore

Valentina
Valentina

and the meeting?

Diego
Diego

what does the meeting matter, valentina

Valentina
Valentina

you're right. sorry

Diego
Diego
Voice message

Valentina listens to the audio twice. The second time her eyes are closed. When she opens them, the waiter is looking at her from the bar. She shakes her head slowly, as if to tell him she's fine. She's not fine.

Valentina
Valentina

of course it counts. diego, of course it does

Valentina
Valentina

i didn't say i don't love you. i said i don't know if i love you the same as before

Valentina
Valentina

although i understand it sounds just as bad

Diego
Diego

yes. it sounds just as bad

Diego
Diego

...

Diego
Diego

how long have you been feeling this way?

Valentina looks at the question. She starts writing. A single word. Four letters. She deletes it before pressing send.

On Diego's screen, the dots appear. And they disappear. The chat remains in silence. He is still in the street, with the Valencia cold coming through his shirt collar, waiting for a response that doesn't arrive.

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