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El Turno de Nochebuena
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El Turno de Nochebuena

On Christmas Eve, Rosa is asked by her coworker Miguel to cover his shift at the supermarket — but he won't say why. As she breaks the news to her worried mom, a surprising photo reveals Miguel's secret.

42 messages1 min read
December 24th — 9:02 a.m.
Miguel
Miguel

😟

Rosa... can you work for me today? It is very important 😟

Rosa
Rosa

😳

What? Miguel, today is Christmas Eve 😳

Miguel
Miguel

Yes, I know. I'm very sorry.

Rosa
Rosa

Why can't you work?

Miguel
Miguel

🙈

It's a secret 🙈

Rosa
Rosa

😤

A secret?? Miguel, no 😤

Miguel
Miguel

Please Rosa. It's very important to me. Very, very important.

Rosa
Rosa

My family is at home today...

Miguel
Miguel

🙏

I know. You are a very good person, Rosa 🙏

Rosa
Rosa

ugh... ok. I'll work from 5 to 10.

Miguel
Miguel

😭❤️

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! 😭❤️

Rosa closes the chat with Miguel. She opens a new chat — with her mom.

Chat with Mom
Rosa
Rosa

Mom... I have bad news.

Mamá
Mamá

What's wrong, my love?

Rosa
Rosa

I'm working today. At the supermarket. From 5 to 10.

Mamá
Mamá

😢

Today? But Rosa, it's Christmas Eve 😢

Rosa
Rosa

I know, Mom. I'm sorry.

Mamá
Mamá
Voice message

Rosa
Rosa

🤞

Yes, Mom. I'm leaving at 10. I promise! 🤞

Mamá
Mamá

❤️

Fine. I'll wait for you. ❤️

5 hours later — 5:00 p.m.

That afternoon, Rosa puts on her work uniform and heads to the supermarket. At 5 p.m. her shift begins. She and Miguel's manager are surprised to see her — but say nothing. Hours pass slowly.

Chat with Miguel
Rosa
Rosa

Miguel. I'm at work. Where are you?

Miguel
Miguel

🍽️

At a restaurant 🍽️

Rosa
Rosa

A restaurant? On Christmas Eve?

Miguel
Miguel

Yes. With Lucía.

Rosa
Rosa

Lucía?? Your girlfriend?

Miguel
Miguel

Yes. Look.

Miguel
MiguelCharming ink and watercolor painting, clean lines, vibrant but soft color palette, storybook style. A close-up photo taken by a young man — a small open ring box held in his hand, containing a simple gold engagement ring with a tiny sparkling diamond, resting on a white restaurant tablecloth with a lit candle and a red rose blurred softly in the background.
Rosa
Rosa

😱😱😱

Rosa
Rosa

Are you going to... propose? Tonight!

Miguel
Miguel

😅

Yes 😅 That's why it's a secret. Lucía doesn't know.

Rosa
Rosa

😭

ok ok ok. I'm not angry. I'm... happy 😭

Miguel
Miguel

💙

haha thanks Rosa. You're the best 💙

Rosa
Rosa

🤞🤞🤞

Good luck! 🤞🤞🤞

10:00 p.m.

Rosa works the rest of her shift with a big smile. At 10 p.m., she takes off her uniform and rushes out into the cold Christmas Eve night.

Chat with Mom
Rosa
Rosa

🚶‍♀️

Mom, I'm heading home now. 🚶‍♀️

Mamá
Mamá

❤️

Great! Dinner is ready. We're waiting for you ❤️

Miguel
Miguel
Voice message

Rosa
Rosa

😭😭😭 🎉🥂

😭😭😭 Merry Christmas Miguel! Congratulations! 🎉🥂

Rosa
Rosa
Voice message

Rosa: Mom, are you there? Mom: Yes, yes, I'm here. Where are you? Rosa: I'm close. One minute. Mom, I have news! Mom: What news? Rosa: Miguel and Lucía... they're getting married! Mom: No! Really? Rosa: Yes! That's why I'm working today. It's a Christmas Eve secret! Mom: Oh, how lovely. How lovely. Come quickly, Rosa. Rosa: Yes, I'm coming Mom. I'm coming. Merry Christmas!

Rosa arrives home at 10:25 p.m. The table is full of food. Her parents are waiting at the door. She is late — but she is there.

Mamá
Mamá

🎄❤️

Merry Christmas, my love. 🎄❤️

Alex
Alex

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