In a night of late messages — just the two of them — Valentina and Diego finally say everything they've kept quiet: the fears, the people they've become, what they feel and what they no longer know. The ending leaves open the only question that matters.
Barcelona and Valencia. 21:47. Two hours have passed since Diego's last message. Two hours in which neither of them has written anything — not to each other and not to anyone else. Valentina has arrived at her apartment without clearly remembering the way. She has placed her coat on the chair. She has sat on the floor. And she has stayed there.
Valentina
hey
Diego
hey
Valentina
are you home?
Diego
yes. for a little while now
Diego
and you?
Valentina
yes. I'm on the floor
Diego
on the floor why
Valentina
I don't know. I arrived and I sat here and I haven't moved
Diego
I've been looking at a glass of water for an hour
There is a six-minute pause. Neither of them forces anything. The chat is still but neither disappears. Both remain online.
Valentina
can I ask you something?
Diego
sure
Valentina
do you feel like you've changed? in these months that I wasn't there
Diego reads the question. He gets up, takes the glass of water, drinks half. He sits back down. He writes.
Diego
yes
Diego
I think in these months I've become more serious. or more... closed off, I don't know
Diego
before I used to talk more. with you, with friends. now I spend many days without saying anything that matters
Valentina
I've become different too
Valentina
here I'm more independent. I like being alone, it doesn't bother me not having plans
Valentina
and at the same time sometimes I get home and the silence weighs on me too much
Diego
and in those moments do you think of me?
Valentina reads the question. She doesn't delete it. She doesn't rewrite it. She answers in less than a minute.
Valentina
yes. always
Diego
Diego
me too. for whatever it's worth
Valentina
it is worth something
—
There is another pause. This time shorter — four minutes. As if the rhythm between them had changed. As if for the first time in months both were in the same conversation.
Valentina
Voice message
Diego listens to the audio. Then he listens to it again. On the table, the glass of water is still half-full. Outside, Valencia has truly reached nighttime.
Diego
thanks for telling me that
Diego
seriously
Valentina
I should have told you months ago
Diego
yes. and I should have told you many things before you did
Diego
Voice message
—
Valentina listens to the audio once. She doesn't repeat it. Her eyes are closed. When she opens them, her apartment window is dark except for the city lights in the distance. The radiator hums behind her.
Valentina
the thing about stopping letting you try
Valentina
that's what I did, right
Diego
yes. but I understand why
Diego
now I understand it
Valentina
and the train?
Valentina
are you going to come this weekend
Diego's dots appear. They disappear. They appear. This time they take longer than before.
Diego
I don't know yet
Diego
I haven't canceled the ticket
Valentina
Diego
I think we both need a little more time to know what we want to do with all this
Valentina
yes
Valentina
but are we okay? I mean... us, right now, tonight?
Diego
I think so
Diego
tonight, yes
—
The chat stays quiet for a while. Not uncomfortable — quiet. Both remain online. Valentina's radiator keeps humming. Diego's glass of water remains half-full. The night goes on.
Private chat: Valentina and Elena 💬
Elena
hey. I know you said not now but it's eleven and I want to know if you're okay
Valentina
I'm okay
Valentina
we talked. for real. I think for the first time in months
Elena
and what's going to happen
Valentina
I don't know
Valentina
but tonight we do know something
Elena
what
Valentina
that the two people we were before no longer exist. and that that's not necessarily a bad thing
Elena
I love you Valen
Elena
now go to sleep
Private chat: Diego and Valentina 💬
Valentina closes the chat with Elena. She goes back to the chat with Diego. The time on the phone is now past twelve-thirty. He is still online.
Diego
you're still awake
Valentina
yes. you too
Diego
obviously
Valentina
Valentina
do you think we still fit? the real version of both of us. who we are now
Diego reads the question. He gets up. He walks to the window of his apartment in Valencia and looks at the empty street below. He returns to the table. He picks up the phone. And he writes for three minutes without stopping.
Diego
I don't know. and I think it's the first time in my life that that answer doesn't seem like a bad sign to me
Diego
because today we've truly seen each other. and we hadn't done that in a long time
Diego
the rest remains to be seen
Valentina
yes
Valentina
remains to be seen
Almost two more hours pass. 02:21. The chat has had no activity for a while. Diego is no longer online. Valentina isn't either. And then Valentina opens the window of her apartment, leans her elbows on the frame, and looks at the city.
Valentina
Valentina sends the photo without text. Without an emoji. Without anything. She leaves the phone on the windowsill and continues looking at the city. A minute later, the phone vibrates.
Diego
Voice message
—
Valentina listens to the audio. Four seconds. She listens to it again. Then she closes the window slowly, without making a noise, as if she didn't want to break something. She sits on the bed. She looks at the ceiling. The city of Barcelona is still out there, lit up, knowing nothing. And Valentina, for the first time in many months, doesn't know what is going to happen — and she isn't afraid.
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